The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates the number of movies produced by five different countries during the years
2007,2008 and 2009.
This
graph clearly explains that country
A has the most films
produced compared to all the other countries across all three years
. For country
A the years
2007 and 2008 were more or less the same in numbers but there was a slight decline in the year
2009.
On the other hand
, the least number of films
produced was by country
E and there is a dramatic difference between country
A and country
E.
Overall
, throughout those years
country
E didn't achieve to produce more than 15 films
a year
.
The year
2009 seems to be the best year
in the film production industry as in most countries besides
country
D has had the biggest number of films
produced in that year
.
To conclude
, there is a huge gap between one country
and the next when it comes to the total of film production in each year
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