The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustrated data compares the number the

movie

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movies

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produced over three consecutive years between 2007 and 2009 in five different countries.

Overall

movie

production has increased in all countries except

country

A, which shows a declining trend in

movie

production. Upon analysing the data closely,

Country

A came out on top in all three

year

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years

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while

country

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the country

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become

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became

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the least

movie

-producing

country

. The closer perspective

further

depicts two trends in all mentioned countries with

Country

showed

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showing

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a negative trend in 2009 after maintaining a plateau for 2 years.

Conversely

, all the

country

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countries

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showed a comparative increase in

movie

production:

Country

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and Country

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showing showing

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showed

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a skyrocketing increase, reaching 20 more

movie

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movies

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produced. Meanwhile, C and E showed a steady increase reaching 20 and 10 respectively.

Finally

country

D regained its position in 2009, similar to 2007, with well over 10

movie

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movies

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produced.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

142 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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