The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustrated data compares the number the

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produced over three consecutive years between 2007 and 2009 in five different countries.

Overall

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production has increased in all countries except

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A, which shows a declining trend in

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production. Upon analysing the data closely,

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A came out on top in all three

year

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while

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country

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become

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the least

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-producing

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. The closer perspective

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depicts two trends in all mentioned countries with

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showed

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a negative trend in 2009 after maintaining a plateau for 2 years.

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, all the

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country

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countries

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showed a comparative increase in

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production:

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and Country

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showing showing

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a skyrocketing increase, reaching 20 more

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produced. Meanwhile, C and E showed a steady increase reaching 20 and 10 respectively.

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D regained its position in 2009, similar to 2007, with well over 10

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produced.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words movie, country with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

142 words

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The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that Olympics games are exciting events that bring ather nations together. Other say Olympics is a waste of money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Some people say that the Internet is responsible for destroying social skills of teenagers and young adults. Why do you think the Internet is seen as dangerous in this way and what can we do to ensure that it does not harm the social development of teenagers and young adults?

Prevention is better than cure” Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and prevention measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?