the line graph below shows the main reasons people gave for moving away from a particular capital city to the countryside.

the line graph below shows the main reasons people gave for moving away from a particular capital city to the countryside.
The graph depicts information on three significant causes
people
demonstrated for the migration from a major city to a rural area. As can be seen, all three reasons showed an increasing
trend
during a period of 20 years between 1990 and 2010. Compared to the other two reasons, the rising cost of living was always considered the most common one among
people
during the 20-year period. In 1990, around 65000 immigrants had
this
reason. The
number
grew steadily until it reached more than 85000 in 2000 which is actually the peak
number
for all included factors in all time.
However
, the
trend
changed from 2000 and mildly decreased until it got to 80000 in 2010 which still was higher than the point the
trend
started in 1990. In terms of the other two reasons,
although
traffic was a little bit more common among the
people
, both traffic and lifestyle showed a similar pattern during the period of 20 years. In 1990, the
number
of
people
who shared the same opinion about the issue of traffic was approximately 20000.
This
amount rose gradually close to 35000 by the year 2000, and
then
sharply climbed to 60000 in 2010.
Also
, regarding the matter of lifestyle, a steady
trend
is evident. In 1990, about 20000 individuals held the same view on
this
reason.
This
number
progressively reached about 40000.
To sum up
, as
this
graph displays the major causes
people
explained for moving away from a big city to the countryside, all three causes exhibited an increasing tendency from 1990 to 2000.
While
the rising cost of living illustrated a decline from 2000 to 2010, still it was higher than its starting point.
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