the graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of families
have
Correct pronoun usage
who have
Use synonyms
car
in Add an article
a car
the car
the
Britain between 1971 and 2007. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the ones who had no Linking Words
car
and had Use synonyms
two
Use synonyms
cars
have changed dramatically. Use synonyms
while
another Linking Words
two
groups remained steady in the given period.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, the proportion of families with Linking Words
two
Use synonyms
cars
grew drastically from the first period to the end, about 9% to approximately 27%, respectively. on the opposite, the percentage of individuals that did not Use synonyms
car
decreased sharply from just under 50% to 25% in 2007.
the people with one Use synonyms
car
in Use synonyms
the
Great Britain remained by a little bit changes. the trend started at about 40% in 1971 and finished near 41%. Correct article usage
apply
Also
, the people who had three or more Linking Words
cars
had the same trend as the ones who had one Use synonyms
car
. For those Use synonyms
this
trend began Linking Words
with
1% at first and ended Change preposition
at
by
about 8%. In fact, Change preposition
at
this
group have had a little change.
Linking Words
Totally
, Rephrase
In total
two
groups of one Use synonyms
car
and three or more Use synonyms
cars
had the same situation.Use synonyms
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