the graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of families
have
Correct pronoun usage
who have
car
in Add an article
a car
the car
the
Britain between 1971 and 2007. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, it is clear that
the ones who had no car
and had two
cars
have changed dramatically. while
another two
groups remained steady in the given period.
To begin
with, the proportion of families with two
cars
grew drastically from the first period to the end, about 9% to approximately 27%, respectively. on the opposite, the percentage of individuals that did not car
decreased sharply from just under 50% to 25% in 2007.
the people with one car
in the
Great Britain remained by a little bit changes. the trend started at about 40% in 1971 and finished near 41%. Correct article usage
apply
Also
, the people who had three or more cars
had the same trend as the ones who had one car
. For those this
trend began with
1% at first and ended Change preposition
at
by
about 8%. In fact, Change preposition
at
this
group have had a little change.
Totally
, Rephrase
In total
two
groups of one car
and three or more cars
had the same situation.Submitted by s_karimi2002 on
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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