The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates a survey result of asking teenagers about the main reasons behind them using their
phone
between 2016 and 2019 in one of the African countries. The shown reasons are social Fix the agreement mistake
phones
networks
, email, digital camera
, and Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
phone
calls.
At first,
social networks
rank the
first Correct article usage
apply
between
all other causes in all years from 2016 to 2019. In 2016, it took fifty Change preposition
among
percent
, exactly Change the spelling
per cent
the
half, of the phones usages. Correct article usage
apply
While
,
emails took Remove the comma
apply
quarter
. Social Correct article usage
a quarter
Networks
got less in 2017 than 2016
. Change preposition
in 2016
However
, the phone
calls reason takes
the lowest place in Wrong verb form
took
the
Correct article usage
apply
teenagers
usage between 2016 and 2019.
Emails declined a year after the other without rising. Change to a genitive case
teenager's
teenagers'
Adding
, digital cameras were used in the same amount in 2016 and 2017. After, climbed to a tiny rise in the percentage in 2018 and 2019. The Replace the word
Additionally
phone
calls climbed from 2016 to 2017,
but Remove the comma
apply
then
fell in 2018 and 2019. Over all years, social networks
in 2019 was
the highest.Change the verb form
were
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phone, networks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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