You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The line graphs illustrate changes in ownership of electrical products and the number of hours in housework and families in a nation from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, they provided three types of appliances, which are washing machines
, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners.
Firstly
, 40% of people used washing machines
in the year 1920. After
this
, it gradually increased until 1960. However
, it decreased for the next 20 years
. In the years
between 1980 to 2019, there was a dramatic increase. Refrigerators had a dramatical
increase until 1960 with 90%, and it met washing Replace the word
dramatic
machines
by approximately 60%, then
it continuously increased until 2000. After ten years
it was stabilized with usage by every person in the country.
Secondly
, first 40 years
the vacuum cleaner increased quickly around 5% to 90%. Furthermore
, it met and overpassed both washing machines
and fridges in 1940, then
it remained the same after the year 2000. According to
number
of hours of housework rapidly decreased from 1920 to 1960 Change the article
a number
the number
then
it started to decrease slowly until 2019. This
is because the appliances are highly used by people.Submitted by shruthiudhai7 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machines, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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