The diagram below gives the information about the Hawaiian island chain in the centre of the Pacific Ocean. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
The given figure represents
the
detailed information about the Hawaiian Correct article usage
apply
island
chain which present
in the Add a missing verb
is present
center
of Change the spelling
centre
Pacific
Correct article usage
the Pacific
Ocean
.
Hawaiian island
had the oldest volcano
in the last
80m years, which has few
other major islands situated nearby in and around 100kms. Every year, about 7-9 cm of shifts Correct article usage
a few
that
happen in Correct pronoun usage
apply
Correct article usage
the pacific
pacific
plate towards the Hawaiian Capitalize word
Pacific
island
from one side of the ocean
, which will cause the earth to develop the
young Correct article usage
a
volcano
which is built up by numerous amounts of eruptions that occurs
. Below is the ‘Hot spot’ which remains static in nature. The eruption process Change the verb form
occur
which
develops under the Correct pronoun usage
apply
ocean
level of 2883 kms
down from the sea level where the eruption process begins and continues to create a small Correct your spelling
km
volcano
over the sea by crossing the pacific
plate and Capitalize word
Pacific
creates
a tectonic Wrong verb form
creating
pacific
plate shift.
To report that every year, a small or youngest Capitalize word
Pacific
volcano
have been developing under the ocean
level- it can be either a volcano
or island
.Correct article usage
an island
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