The chart and table provide data about cars registered in one country over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given chart and table illustrate the percentage of

cars

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registered with prices of

petrol

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, and three different kinds of fuel used by small

cars

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over 12 years, starting from 2003 to 2015. In general, a downward trend was found in the number of car registrations with the highest figure in 2003 when the

petrol

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price was the lowest over the period, and vice versa in 2011 when

petrol

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was the most expensive.

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, the proportion of small

cars

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rose as the

petrol

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sector decreased throughout

this

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timeframe, the opposite was true for diesel and hybrid. Beginning at over 9.0% with the highest observed

petrol

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price of just above 0.8 pounds/litre in 2003, the percentage of new

cars

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registered experienced a gradual and significant decline to merely 1.4% in 2011 when cost nearly 1.4 pounds per litre,

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rebounded to around 8.0% in 2015. Turning into three engines used by small

cars

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petrol

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was the most popular fuel of all time, followed by diesel and hybrid. The amount of

petrol

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consumed gradually dropped from precisely 83.1% and ended at just 61.2%.

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, diesel and hybrid experienced notable growth, at 37.8% and 0.8%, respectively, in 2015.

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, the number of new

cars

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registered saw an upward fluctuation, ranging between 4.4 and 4.6, before substantially increasing to 6.2% in 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, petrol with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

221 words

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