The chart and table provide data about cars registered in one country over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table provide data about cars registered in one country over a period of time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart and table illustrate the percentage of
cars
registered with prices of
petrol
, and three different kinds of fuel used by small
cars
over 12 years, starting from 2003 to 2015. In general, a downward trend was found in the number of car registrations with the highest figure in 2003 when the
petrol
price was the lowest over the period, and vice versa in 2011 when
petrol
was the most expensive.
In addition
, the proportion of small
cars
rose as the
petrol
sector decreased throughout
this
timeframe, the opposite was true for diesel and hybrid. Beginning at over 9.0% with the highest observed
petrol
price of just above 0.8 pounds/litre in 2003, the percentage of new
cars
registered experienced a gradual and significant decline to merely 1.4% in 2011 when cost nearly 1.4 pounds per litre,
then
rebounded to around 8.0% in 2015. Turning into three engines used by small
cars
,
petrol
was the most popular fuel of all time, followed by diesel and hybrid. The amount of
petrol
consumed gradually dropped from precisely 83.1% and ended at just 61.2%.
In contrast
, diesel and hybrid experienced notable growth, at 37.8% and 0.8%, respectively, in 2015.
In addition
, the number of new
cars
registered saw an upward fluctuation, ranging between 4.4 and 4.6, before substantially increasing to 6.2% in 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, petrol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.

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