The pie chart illustrates the number of people who visited movie theaters in the year 2000 according to their age groups.

The pie chart illustrates the number of people who visited movie theaters in the year 2000 according to their age groups.
The pie chart depicts the number of people who visited movie
theaters
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in the year 2000, categorized by
age
groups
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group
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. The most significant trend is the high proportion of older
cinema
-goers, with those aged 55 and over representing the largest
group
.
Conversely
, individuals aged 31 to 45 comprised the smallest percentage of
cinema
visitors
. The 55 and over
age
group
accounted for 51% of
cinema
attendees in 2000. The second largest
group
was the 10-15
age
group
, representing 21%. Individuals aged 16-20 made up 15% of
cinema
visitors
in 2000. The 31-45
age
group
had the lowest percentage, with only 5% of
cinema
visitors
. The 21-30
age
group
also
had a relatively low attendance, accounting for just 3% of
visitors
.
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