In many countries, it is mandatory for school children to wear uniforms. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Wearing

uniforms

at

school

is necessary in most of the countries for pupils

due to

the policy.

Although

those

policies

stand against schoolchildren's rights of choice, they might help them to concentrate on

school

subjects more, and I strongly believe that

this

advantage is stronger than any potential disadvantages. It is

obviously

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that given

policies

are not tolerant

with

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rights

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the rights

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of the

kids

since it does not allow them to wear whatever they want. As long as

kids

grow , their interests and preferences in clothes change dramatically. So every

parents

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and

school

staff should not be surprised if

kids

want to express themselves

wearing

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unusual things that match their interests.

For

instance

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they may wear a range of

type

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types

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of t-shirts with provocation quotes or even with bright

colors

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which

is

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not hard to notice for everyone around, and the

last

thing I mentioned may

causes

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problems in concentration at

school

for those

kids

whose main goal

there

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is to gain some knowledge. But it could be resolved easily by maintaining standards on

uniforms

for every

school

in the country. On the positive

side

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it helps schools serve

its

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their

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own purpose which is giving useful knowledge to those schoolkids in order to help them to

choosing

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their

favorite

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subjects and by that

making

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their future bright.

Uniforms

help them to feel that sense of equity and everyone comes here to learn and

make

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makes

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them realize that

school

is definitely not the right place to express themselves by wearing clothes but

learning

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by learning

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and having

a

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good memories. In my experience, I saw those tremendous advantages of wearing

uniforms

because in my hometown we have

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the same

policies

and of course, our city has a vast amount of wunderkinds compared to others in our country. I think those

policies

which help

kids

to concentrate and reduce distractions may help the government significantly increase the percentage of well-educated citizens in our country. In conclusion,

although

given

policies

may be controversial against human rights ,I believe that helping

kids

with making their choices and reducing any distractions which is supported by my actual experience outweighed that disadvantage as expected.