Some people think that the goverment is responsible for crime prevention. Others think that it is individuals responsibility to pretocet themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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have different views as to whether it is the responsibility of individuals to protect themselves when any crimes occur. In my perspective, despite it is the duty of

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to look after themselves in

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case, I firmly believe that the majority of responsibility is laid on the

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side. On the one hand, there is one main aspect

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it is the obligation of citizens to take care of themselves when crimes happen. One of the major points is that it is impossible for the authorities to protect them all the time . Generally, all

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would like to be

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in all circumstances, but the authorities have various essential matters to deal with

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as improving public infrastructures, developing education, ensuring public welfare, and increasing health care.

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, some fundamental

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securities

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as staying informed, being aware of their

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,

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security systems would indirectly relieve the

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's burden.

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, there are two main reasons that the

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should take more serious actions to prevent

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in society.

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, it is the

principle

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role of the

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to guarantee the well-being of residents since the

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has the power, which is given by

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from the election, to ensure their

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.

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means that the

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can appropriately utilize the power of law for

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prevention, punishing a person who commits the

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. In doing so, it would reduce criminal activities in the country. In conclusion,

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it is the common duty of

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to protect themselves, I am convinced that the

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should be reliable for

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when it comes to the case of crimes. 1. the

principle

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role of gov 2. duty of

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to ensure

well-being

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the well-being

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of

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/ the gove has the authority given by

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to ensure their

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safeness

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safiness

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safety

3. they can use the power of law to punish 4. reduce

crime

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rate