The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisation from 2008 to 2011.

The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisation from 2008 to 2011.
The bar chart compares the
sum
of
money
received in developing countries from 5 different
organisations
over a period of 4 years.
Overall
, we can notice that the developing states saw a dramatic increase of given cash from the second group, and it gave the highest
sum
of
money
at the end
of the given period.
Nevertheless
, the poorest financier was
Organisation
4 with a decreasing
sum
of
money
each year. In 2008, the third
organisation
provided the most huge amount of cash with certainly 1.5
billion
dollars
,
whereas
the second place was shared by
organisations
2 and 4, which gave just under $1.5
billion
. Other
organisations
such
as the first and the fourth allocated just above 0.5
billion
dollars
. A year after that, developing countries received around $1.8 and $1.5
billion
from associations 3 and 2, about twice as much as the others gave,
organisations
1 and 5
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less than $1
billion
, and the fourth gave about half as much. The second
organisation
allocated the highest amount of cash with less than 2.5
billion
dollars
in 2010,
while
the third one gave only under 1.5
billion
dollars
, but the rest gave between less than $0.5
billion
and $1
billion
,
moreover
, the first and
last
organisations
given
sum
of
money
have no change in the next year, except the fourth one which has seen a decrease and third
organisation
, which experienced a slowly rise in 2011.
However
, the 2nd group have reached the name
that is
the richest with more than 2.5 invested in finance in 2011.
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