The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisation from 2008 to 2011.

The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisation from 2008 to 2011.
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The bar chart compares the
sum
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of
money
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received in developing countries from 5 different
organisations
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over a period of 4 years.
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, we can notice that the developing states saw a dramatic increase of given cash from the second group, and it gave the highest
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of
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at the end
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of the given period.
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, the poorest financier was
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4 with a decreasing
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of
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each year. In 2008, the third
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provided the most huge amount of cash with certainly 1.5
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dollars
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,
whereas
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the second place was shared by
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2 and 4, which gave just under $1.5
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. Other
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such
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as the first and the fourth allocated just above 0.5
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dollars
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. A year after that, developing countries received around $1.8 and $1.5
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from associations 3 and 2, about twice as much as the others gave,
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1 and 5
lended
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less than $1
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, and the fourth gave about half as much. The second
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allocated the highest amount of cash with less than 2.5
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dollars
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in 2010,
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the third one gave only under 1.5
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dollars
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, but the rest gave between less than $0.5
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and $1
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,
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, the first and
last
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organisations
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given
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of
money
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have no change in the next year, except the fourth one which has seen a decrease and third
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, which experienced a slowly rise in 2011.
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, the 2nd group have reached the name
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the richest with more than 2.5 invested in finance in 2011.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sum, money, organisations, organisation, billion, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 9 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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