You work for an international company.You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager.In your letter .describe the trainning course you want to do .explain what the company could do to help you .say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to join the training
course
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in
advertisiment
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advertising
.
Firstly
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,
this
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training
course
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is very useful for my job and very close
in
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the international
company
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.
Also
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if I join
this
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training
course
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I will increase my qualification.
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, there are lots of
qualifiled
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qualified
teacher
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teachers
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is
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who is
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teaching and training
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course
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courses
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very comfortable.
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Also
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this
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training
course
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's price is cheaper
to
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than
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another
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other
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training courses.
Secondly
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, I want to get
good
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a good
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salary
by
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from
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international
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the international
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company
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because I
am increase
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am increasing
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my
qualification
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qualifications
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. Can you make free time out of work for my training
course
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.
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If I join
this
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training
course
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I will
make
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do
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new
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a new
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project
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projects
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and lots of creative
thing
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things
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.
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Also
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I will bring a lot of benefits.
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, when I
will
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make new project you can get employment in your
company
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and you can expand the
company
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. When we expand the
company
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we can contract to
new
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the new
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famous
company
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. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully , Rajabov Aziz

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task achievement
Provide more specific details about the training course, such as its name, duration, and content. This will help to create a more complete response that clearly addresses the prompt.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve clarity and coherence. For example, one paragraph can describe the course, another can discuss company support, and a third can explain the benefits of the course.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which helps structure the communication professionally.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and appropriately formal for a business context.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • training course
  • skillset enhancement
  • educational leave
  • sponsorship
  • reimbursement
  • knowledge integration
  • work efficiency
  • career progression
  • continuing education
  • team contribution
  • productivity boost
  • expertise building
  • industry standards
  • hands-on experience
  • networking opportunities
  • cutting-edge techniques
  • best practices
  • return on investment
  • in-house training
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