You work for an international company.You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager.In your letter .describe the trainning course you want to do .explain what the company could do to help you .say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to join the training
course
in Use synonyms
advertisiment
.
Correct your spelling
advertising
Firstly
, Linking Words
this
training Linking Words
course
is very useful for my job and very close Use synonyms
in
the international Change preposition
to
company
. Use synonyms
Also
if I join Linking Words
this
training Linking Words
course
I will increase my qualification. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, there are lots of Linking Words
qualifiled
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qualified
teacher
Change to a plural noun
teachers
is
teaching and training Correct pronoun usage
who is
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course
very comfortable. Fix the agreement mistake
courses
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Also
Add a comma
Also,
this
training Linking Words
course
's price is cheaper Use synonyms
to
Change preposition
than
another
training courses.
Correct quantifier usage
other
Secondly
, I want to get Linking Words
good
salary Correct article usage
a good
by
Change preposition
from
international
Add an article
the international
an international
company
because I Use synonyms
am increase
my Change the verb form
am increasing
qualification
. Can you make free time out of work for my training Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
course
Use synonyms
.
If I join Change the punctuation
?
this
training Linking Words
course
I will Use synonyms
make
Verb problem
do
new
Add an article
a new
project
and lots of creative Fix the agreement mistake
projects
thing
. Change to a plural noun
things
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Also
I will bring a lot of benefits. Add a comma
Also,
Furthermore
, when I Linking Words
will
make new project you can get employment in your Verb problem
do
company
and you can expand the Use synonyms
company
. When we expand the Use synonyms
company
we can contract to Use synonyms
new
famous Add an article
the new
company
.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully ,
Rajabov AzizUse synonyms
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task achievement
Provide more specific details about the training course, such as its name, duration, and content. This will help to create a more complete response that clearly addresses the prompt.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve clarity and coherence. For example, one paragraph can describe the course, another can discuss company support, and a third can explain the benefits of the course.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which helps structure the communication professionally.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and appropriately formal for a business context.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite