The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The line chart provides information about the average monthly
changes
in the prices across three different metal categories, namely copper, nickel, and zinc in 2014.
It is clear that
the prices of all three metals fluctuated during the given period. Another notable point is that the three types of metals ultimately exhibited similar price
change trends.
Looking at the information in more detail, nickel's price
changes
(the price
changes
of nickel) started at 6% in January and then
dramatically decreased to 1%.Afterwards, it reached a low point of -3% in June, rose to 1% in November, and remained at this
level in December.
In terms of the price
changes
for copper, it began at 2% and gradually diminished to -0.5% in May. Following
this
decline, it reached a plateau at
1% during July and September. Change preposition
of
Finally
, the price
change increased to 2% in December.As for zinc, it started at 1% and grew to 3%, then
significantly decreased to -1% in June, which was the same percentage as in October. By December, the percentage reached its highest point at 2% compared to the other metals.Submitted by zora840810 on
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