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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter ● say where you think you left the papers ● explain why they are so important ● tell the manager what you want him to do

#hotel #home #papers #manager
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you because
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 forgot some important
papers
 at your hotel. I stayed at your hotel on Sunday to attend a meeting. I think
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 left my
papers
 in
restaurant
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the restaurant
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. The
papers
 are very important to me. They have information about my job. I need these
papers
 for an important project.
Beside
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i
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also
 had a
docoments
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document
documents
of
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 my house. It's very important to find them. My future depends on these
papers
. I would be very happy if you could check for the
papers
. If you find them, please call me at 9044210099 Thank you for your prompt attention to
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Your
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 faithfully, Umirov Fayozbek.
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accuracy
Proofread your writing for minor grammatical and typographical errors such as 'i' instead of 'I' and 'docoments' instead of 'documents'.
structure
The letter follows a clear and logical structure, making it easy for the reader to follow.
tone
The letter includes a proper greeting and closing, which adds to the formality and politeness.
clarity
Each paragraph addresses a single idea, contributing to overall clarity.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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