The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following table shows information
of
Change preposition
on
consumers
in 2002 spending their incomes Use synonyms
to
different items. Change preposition
on
This
data involves Linking Words
consumers
from Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
consumers
in all five Use synonyms
countries
spent comparatively more on food, drinks and tobacco products. Looking through all the data, the most significant Use synonyms
expenditure
was on Use synonyms
this
category.
As Linking Words
it
can be seen, in all shown Correct pronoun usage
apply
countries
’ Use synonyms
expenditure
on food, drinks and tobacco are major. In Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
Use synonyms
field
Ireland’s and Turkey’s Add a comma
field,
consumers
had the highest expenses from the presented Use synonyms
countries
, 28.91 and 32.14, Use synonyms
accordingly
. Linking Words
Other
three Correct article usage
The other
countries
shared approximately similar numbers, fluctuating between 15 and 19. The second category of items Use synonyms
include
clothing and footwear. Italy stood out, because their Change the verb form
includes
consumers
gave 9% of their Use synonyms
expenditure
to Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
field
, Use synonyms
while
Ireland’s, Spain’s, Sweden’s and Turkey’s data showed less than 7% of expenses spent on Linking Words
this
.
As regards the Linking Words
last
Linking Words
field
, leisure and education Use synonyms
attracts
little spending from Change the verb form
attract
consumers
compared to other areas. In all five Use synonyms
countries
, spending in Use synonyms
this
area is the lowest. Linking Words
This
Linking Words
expenditure
on Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
field
has Use synonyms
the
minimum Correct article usage
a
1.98
% of Spain’s Change preposition
of 1.98
consumers
and Use synonyms
the
maximum Correct article usage
a
4.35
% of Turkey’s Change preposition
of 4.35
consumers
. Italy’s and Sweden’s Use synonyms
appliance
here Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
was
similar, 3.20% and 3.22%, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
while
Ireland’s Linking Words
Use synonyms
consumers
Change to a genitive case
consumer's
consumers'
expense
on leisure and education showed only 2.21%.Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumers, countries, expenditure, field with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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