The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following table shows information
of
Change preposition
on
consumers
in 2002 spending their incomes to
different items. Change preposition
on
This
data involves consumers
from Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey.
Overall
, consumers
in all five countries
spent comparatively more on food, drinks and tobacco products. Looking through all the data, the most significant expenditure
was on this
category.
As it
can be seen, in all shown Correct pronoun usage
apply
countries
’ expenditure
on food, drinks and tobacco are major. In this
field
Ireland’s and Turkey’s Add a comma
field,
consumers
had the highest expenses from the presented countries
, 28.91 and 32.14, accordingly
. Other
three Correct article usage
The other
countries
shared approximately similar numbers, fluctuating between 15 and 19. The second category of items include
clothing and footwear. Italy stood out, because their Change the verb form
includes
consumers
gave 9% of their expenditure
to this
field
, while
Ireland’s, Spain’s, Sweden’s and Turkey’s data showed less than 7% of expenses spent on this
.
As regards the last
field
, leisure and education attracts
little spending from Change the verb form
attract
consumers
compared to other areas. In all five countries
, spending in this
area is the lowest. This
expenditure
on this
field
has the
minimum Correct article usage
a
1.98
% of Spain’s Change preposition
of 1.98
consumers
and the
maximum Correct article usage
a
4.35
% of Turkey’s Change preposition
of 4.35
consumers
. Italy’s and Sweden’s appliance
here Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
was
similar, 3.20% and 3.22%, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
while
Ireland’s consumers
Change to a genitive case
consumer's
consumers'
expense
on leisure and education showed only 2.21%.Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
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