The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following table shows information
of
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on
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consumers
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in 2002 spending their incomes
to
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on
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different items.
This
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data involves
consumers
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from Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey.
Overall
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,
consumers
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in all five
countries
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spent comparatively more on food, drinks and tobacco products. Looking through all the data, the most significant
expenditure
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was on
this
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category. As
it
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apply
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can be seen, in all shown
countries
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expenditure
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on food, drinks and tobacco are major. In
this
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field
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field,
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Ireland’s and Turkey’s
consumers
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had the highest expenses from the presented
countries
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, 28.91 and 32.14,
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.
Other
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The other
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three
countries
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shared approximately similar numbers, fluctuating between 15 and 19. The second category of items
include
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includes
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clothing and footwear. Italy stood out, because their
consumers
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gave 9% of their
expenditure
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to
this
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field
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,
while
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Ireland’s, Spain’s, Sweden’s and Turkey’s data showed less than 7% of expenses spent on
this
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. As regards the
last
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field
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, leisure and education
attracts
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attract
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little spending from
consumers
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compared to other areas. In all five
countries
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, spending in
this
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area is the lowest.
This
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expenditure
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on
this
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field
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has
the
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a
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minimum
1.98
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of 1.98
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% of Spain’s
consumers
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and
the
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a
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maximum
4.35
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of 4.35
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% of Turkey’s
consumers
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. Italy’s and Sweden’s
appliance
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appliances
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here
was
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were
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similar, 3.20% and 3.22%,
while
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Ireland’s
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consumers
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consumer's
consumers'
show examples
expense
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expenses
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on leisure and education showed only 2.21%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumers, countries, expenditure, field with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • food
  • drinks
  • tobacco
  • clothing
  • footwear
  • household goods
  • services
  • leisure
  • education
  • other products
  • comparison
  • highest
  • lowest
  • followed by
  • in all countries
  • various
  • summarise
  • main features
  • relevant
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • spending
  • table
  • goods
  • data
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