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The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given illustration delineates the cycled process of frogs’ lives in a lake.
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, it is readily apparent that the cycle comprises eleven stages.
Nevertheless
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, there are three main sections, namely development of fertilized eggs,
growth
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the growth
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 of limbs and maturation. In the first stage, an adult frog leaves eggs, which transform
to
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into
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the
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apply
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embryos. Afterwards, embryos develop into tadpoles, grabbing
water-plants
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water plants
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.
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this
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, to breathe, tadpoles obtain outer gills, simultaneously their tales continue growing. Over the course of the following step, tadpoles grow back limbs, next, they use their tails as a storage. Once they obtain their
fore limbs
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forelimbs
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, the color of their skin changes. After that, their tails undergo a decrease, before becoming
mature
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a mature
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 frog

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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