The maps below show the centre of a small twon called Islip is it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps compare changes that will have happened in the centre of the city that name is Islip in two various times( now and future).

Overall

, the number of people who will be living in

this

town increase;

moreover

, the Facilities which the city has will develop;

however

, the rural area will be destroyed.

According to

the pictures, The road which is in the centre of

this

region will alter to a Dual carriageway that will be around town and the main road will be replaced by

the

Correct article usage

apply

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pedestrians.

In addition

, the residential district will be the same as the prior in the south, but

Correct pronoun usage

there

show examples

will be new housing in the north of the city. The graphs illustrate the school, and shops, in the south, and the park will be the same as now;

nevertheless

, the park will be smaller than today.

while

north's shops and countryside will be changed by a new place which will help inhabitants

such

as car park, shopping centre, and bus station.

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