The maps below show the centre of a small twon called Islip is it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small twon called Islip is it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps compare changes that will have happened in the centre of the city that name is Islip in two various times( now and future).
Overall
, the number of people who will be living in
this
town increase;
moreover
, the Facilities which the city has will develop;
however
, the rural area will be destroyed.
According to
the pictures, The road which is in the centre of
this
region will alter to a Dual carriageway that will be around town and the main road will be replaced by
the
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pedestrians.
In addition
, the residential district will be the same as the prior in the south, but
it
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there
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will be new housing in the north of the city. The graphs illustrate the school, and shops, in the south, and the park will be the same as now;
nevertheless
, the park will be smaller than today.
while
north's shops and countryside will be changed by a new place which will help inhabitants
such
as car park, shopping centre, and bus station.
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