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The table below gives information about the average annual distance travelled by adults and the types of travel in 1977 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the average annual distance travelled by adults and the types of travel in 1977 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates different means of transportation with the average lengths of
road
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the road
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traveled
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 by the grownup over a 30-year period.
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, upward trends were witnessed in all the categories, except two-wheel vehicles, the bus, and the walking section. The highest
distance
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 was exhibited in the car sector and the opposite can be seen in bicycle. In 1997, standing at 3500
km
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, the highest
distance
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 gone by adults belonged to cars, followed by trains, buses, and taxis with 900
km
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, 800
km
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, and 200
km
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. In 2007, the figure for the car category increased significantly to 7100
km
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 - double the 1977's.
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 the average
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 by train rose slightly to 1000
km
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, the number for bus section moderately decreased to 500
km
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at the end
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 of the given period. The road length gone by taxi dramatically grew to 800 - four times the initial. Regarding two-wheel transportation, in 1997, the average
distance
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traveled
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 by motorcycle and bicycle was 100
km
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.
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 of the observed period, the length of motorcycles declined to 90
km
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,
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 the bicycles dropped to 80
km
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.The figure for the walking sector was 400
km
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 and
then
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 decreased to 300
km
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 in 2007.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words distance, km with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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