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The pie charts below show usage share of desktop browsers in 2019 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show usage share of desktop browsers in 2019 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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An initial analysis of the pie charts for 2019 and 2021 compares the consumption of 5 desktop browsers.
Overall
, Chrome presided over other computer browsers in both years, taking up a substantial chunk of
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decreasing
 marginally. Chrome was used the most by internet users , occupying
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 total usage.It experienced
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 2% in 2021 amounting to
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 67% .Firefox had a 9% activity from all users , which reduced by a
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 in 2 years. Interestingly, with the same value Safari’s usage rose in 2021, which became the second proverbial browser. Turning to the least-appealed browser, Edge stood at 5% use .
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, it soared to 9% , becoming the third most active website. Other computer browsers fell
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 6% in 2021, making it the least-used website.
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