In many countries government spend a lot of money on arts. However, some think government should spend more on health and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Ensure that your essay addresses the prompt directly. Begin with an introduction that outlines your main argument and what your essay will discuss.

coherence and cohesion

Develop each of your main points in separate paragraphs and provide specific examples to support your arguments.

coherence and cohesion

End with a strong conclusion that summarizes your key points and restates your position on the prompt.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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61 words

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In many countries government spend a lot of money on arts. However, some think government should spend more on health and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games. Why do they do this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problem,as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?