The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in 4 Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in 4 Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
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The data below
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illustrates
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percentage
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the percentage
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of humans
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who
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are living in 4 different
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Asian
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countries
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especially
in towns from 1970 to 2020 and
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the prediction
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to
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for
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next
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the next
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20
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, we can see that over
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fifty
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a compirison
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compirison
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comparison
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countries
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Phillppines
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Phillippines
was the most populated nation, meanwhile
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the other
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three
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countres
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countries
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the same
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proportions
. All 3 nations were predicted to have
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an upward
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trend next 20
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, in
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the 1970's
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the least populated nation was Indonesia(about 12 per cent),wheres
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the Phillippines
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urbans
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urban
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were
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most
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the most
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residented
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residents
with(31 per cent) which was over the one per cent than
Malasya
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Malaysia
. Over the
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the situation has been
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.
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Furthermore
, Malasya and
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the Philippines
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were
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almost
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in
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the 1990's
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1990's
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1990s
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,
then
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Malasya
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doubled
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the stats for almost twice with
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a prediction
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to
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2040. The graph
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that no one had
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a downward
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trend sins 1970
insed of
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Philippines
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the Philippines
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who's had a
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little
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over
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1990 to 2010. In the
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it is worth mentioning that apparently
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Thailand
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the next 20
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will see the
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greatest
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greatest growth
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growth
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • population density
  • rural-urban migration
  • economic development
  • industrialization
  • infrastructure strain
  • environmental impacts
  • social challenges
  • urban planning
  • government policies
  • housing policies
  • public services
  • trend analysis
  • prediction
  • initiatives
  • urban growth management
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