The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced.

The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced.
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The picture presents the steps for making instant noodles.
Overall
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, it takes around 8 steps to go from flour to processed and packaged as instant noodles.
First,
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the truck will take the flour from the storage silo to the mixer facility to mix the flour with water and oil until it becomes a
dough
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. Once
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dough
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the dough
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are
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is
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mixed well, it will
passed
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pass
be passed
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rollers and become
dough
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sheets and will process until turned into
dough
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strips. The
dough
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strips will be processed in
such
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a way through an automatic machine so that
it
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they
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changes
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change
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shape into
a
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apply
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disc
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discs
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(noodle discs) so its ready to be packaged. Before the noodles discs
is
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are
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packed, cooking oil and drying will be added on the top first and everything will be put into the cup.
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, don’t forget to add vegetables and spices as
complement
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.
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, we need to seal the cup and give a label for marketing purposes.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words dough with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Orchard
  • Harvest
  • Processing facility
  • Quality control
  • Extraction
  • Pasteurization
  • Filtration
  • Preservatives
  • Fortification
  • Deaeration
  • Shelf life
  • Distribution
  • Bottling
  • Packaging
  • Labeling
  • Environmental impact
  • Sustainability
  • Waste management
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