The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2), emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal Between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
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an average
the average
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metric tones
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the
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Kingdom and Portugal Correct article usage
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decades
from 1967 to 2007.
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the decades
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of Carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom and Sweden Correct article usage
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statistics
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as same as Portugal’s .Those falling trends are totally reversed compared to Italy and Portugal as Correct subject-verb agreement
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result Italy’s Correct article usage
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numbers
increased to the UK’s in 2007.
From 1967 to 1997 there are gradually increasing trend of Use synonyms
numbers
in Portugal and Italy. But from 1997 to 2007 there Use synonyms
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no improvements and both country reached their plateaus in Wrong verb form
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which were approximately 7 for Italy and 3 for Portugal.
United Kingdom’s results were marginally decreasing all over 4 Use synonyms
decades
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Which we
cannot say about Sweden, they showed Correct pronoun usage
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between 1967 and 1977 decade which was their peak and started their downfall in Use synonyms
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decades
between 1977 to 2007.Use synonyms
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