The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph illustrates the quantity and differences of
minutes
in three types of calls which are the local-fixed
line
, national and international-fixed
line
and mobiles in the UK starting from 1995 until 2002.
Overall
, despite the fluctuation in the
numbers
, the local-fixed
line
seems to be used more than the other methods, mobiles are the least used method leaving the national and international-fixed
line
in the middle. First and foremost, the majority of the population between 1995 and 2002 depended on local fixed
line
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lines
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of
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cases as nearly 72
billion
minutes
were consumed in 1995.
Furthermore
, the
numbers
of the local-fixed
line
increased in 1998 and 1999 reaching 90
billion
minutes
, but after that, the
numbers
dropped to 72
billion
minutes
again in 2002.
Secondly
, the national and international-fixed
line
showed a gradual elevation in the
numbers
since 1995 as it was approximately 38
billion
minutes
of calling ending to 60
billion
minutes
in 2002. In the end, as mobiles started to be known the number of mobile
minutes
showed a dramatic increase as it was 3
billion
in 1995 and reached 45
billion
in 2002.
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