The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the informahtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the informahtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the salaries of various
professions
Replace the word
professionals
show examples
when they started, compared with their salaries after three years. The adjoining table
also
contains data for the average working
hours
for each profession per week. It can be seen that the salaries after three years have increased for each profession.
However
, the underground
train
driver
got the maximum increment of 2500
Pounds
, and the policeman got the least increment of 600
Pounds
. The nurse got the lowest salary amounting to only approximately 15,700
Pounds
,
whereas
the underground
train
driver
got just under 50,000
Pounds
which was the highest amount of salary in comparison.
On the other hand
, the teacher and the policeman get slightly more than 23,000
Pounds
and 33,000
Pounds
respectively. Comparing
this
data to the working
hours
per week, it is found that the underground
train
driver
is being paid the most amount of money per hour and the nurse is being paid the least.
In contrast
, the teachers and firefighters have 55 working
hours
which is the highest.
Moreover
, the nurse and the underground
train
driver
have 38 and 36 working
hours
respectively, which are the lowest.
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