The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the informahtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the informahtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the salaries of various
professions
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when they started, compared with their salaries after three years. The adjoining table
also
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contains data for the average working
hours
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for each profession per week. It can be seen that the salaries after three years have increased for each profession.
However
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, the underground
train
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driver
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got the maximum increment of 2500
Pounds
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, and the policeman got the least increment of 600
Pounds
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. The nurse got the lowest salary amounting to only approximately 15,700
Pounds
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,
whereas
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the underground
train
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driver
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got just under 50,000
Pounds
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which was the highest amount of salary in comparison.
On the other hand
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, the teacher and the policeman get slightly more than 23,000
Pounds
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and 33,000
Pounds
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respectively. Comparing
this
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data to the working
hours
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per week, it is found that the underground
train
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driver
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is being paid the most amount of money per hour and the nurse is being paid the least.
In contrast
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, the teachers and firefighters have 55 working
hours
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which is the highest.
Moreover
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, the nurse and the underground
train
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driver
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have 38 and 36 working
hours
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respectively, which are the lowest.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, train, driver, pounds with synonyms.
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