The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing
electricity
from one type of coal in the world.
Overall
, there are about five different stages of producing
electricity
from coal, starting from crushing the stone to cooling and
then
producing the
electricity
from a
gas
power
plant.
To begin
with, the coal minerals are taken from the coal site, they are crushed with a crusher into tiny particles into a wooden carriage where they are stored and weighed.
Hence
, the crushed coal is
then
transported with a large truck to a gasifier site where heat is applied to produce
gas
. The
gas
then
passes through to the cooling area, where the waste heat is let out through a funnel with smoke.
Furthermore
, after cooling, the particles are
then
sent to a cleaning facility, where they are cleaned properly before being sent to a
gas
power
plant where waste heat is released.
In addition
, the
gas
power
plant
then
produced the
electricity
through a
power
cable station.
Hence
, the
electricity
is distributed to the society from the
electricity
power
station.
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