The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses.

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The table provides information about the proportion of resources given by Economics, Law, and Commerce in the college to first-year students.

Overall

, the highest pre-

course

information provided by Commerce is noticeable. The lowest rank was observed in the Law

course

's teaching system. The Economics courses showed the smallest percentage of introduction courses which is 59%.

However

, the teaching method is considered the largest one among all other courses rated at 95% in there. Law is the only

course

that depended on more Other resources than the foundation

course

which is 80% and 72% respectively. Tutors in

this

course

ranked 76% and teaching is assessed 62% which is the minimal amount among all other criteria. The commerce

course

's pre-

course

information and teaching is equal to 95% which is the maximum in

this

table.

Also

, tutors evaluated at 93% and the printed resource that they provide is 85%. Other resources that they supply their students are valued at 81%.

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The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses.

In many countries, people watch many foreign made television programs and Internet videos. The dominance of imported entertainment is harmful to the cultures of these countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Is it good for children to start using a computer at a young age? Give the advantages and disadvantages of doing this.

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In many countries, there is a growing gap between the technical skills of younger people and those over the age of fifty. What problems does this cause, and what solutions could minimise the problems?

These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?