The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses.

The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses.
The table provides information about the proportion of resources given by Economics, Law, and Commerce in the college to first-year students.
Overall
, the highest pre-
course
information provided by Commerce is noticeable. The lowest rank was observed in the Law
course
's teaching system. The Economics courses showed the smallest percentage of introduction courses which is 59%.
However
, the teaching method is considered the largest one among all other courses rated at 95% in there. Law is the only
course
that depended on more Other resources than the foundation
course
which is 80% and 72% respectively. Tutors in
this
course
ranked 76% and teaching is assessed 62% which is the minimal amount among all other criteria. The commerce
course
's pre-
course
information and teaching is equal to 95% which is the maximum in
this
table.
Also
, tutors evaluated at 93% and the printed resource that they provide is 85%. Other resources that they supply their students are valued at 81%.
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