The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
Two graphs illustrate the relationship between location (Private studios, Community
halls
and other, School Use synonyms
halls
, and College-based studios) and types of dance classes (Use synonyms
Ballet
, Tap, and Modern), compared by Use synonyms
age
group of children in Australian towns.
Use synonyms
Overall
, most young people like to participate in the Linking Words
class
at a private studio. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the kind of dance classes that girls and boys choose for studying have different types at different ages. Linking Words
Ballet
is the most popular for children under 11 Use synonyms
while
the 11 to 16 Linking Words
age
group likes Modern the most.
The biggest part of the pie chart shows the percentage of individual dance schools at 48%, Use synonyms
while
the college-based studios are the smallest percentage at 10%. Linking Words
Additionally
, Community Linking Words
halls
and unspecified categories and School Use synonyms
halls
have similar percentages at 18 per cent and 24 per cent by order. In the under 11 Use synonyms
age
group graphs, the Use synonyms
ballet
Use synonyms
class
has the greatest number of students at 600, Use synonyms
while
the Modern Linking Words
class
has the lowest point at 300 people. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the modern Linking Words
class
has approximately 500 students which is the highest number of 11 to 16 Use synonyms
age
groups, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
Ballet
is at the lowest point at 300 people. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the tap Linking Words
class
has almost the same rate in both Use synonyms
age
groups.Use synonyms
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