The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagrams illustrate the transformation of the horse
since
40 Change preposition
apply
milion
years time.
Correct your spelling
million
Initially
, this
species called
eohippus during the period of 40 million years. They had a smaller feature and Add a missing verb
was called
toes
instead
of hooves which inclusive of 5 toes
in each leg. Move
on to the 30 million time frame, Wrong verb form
Moving
scientist
named Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
this
animal mesohippus. They began to change drastically double the size than previous, surplus the toes
become
more hoof-like but Wrong verb form
became
are
still distinct with only 3 Wrong verb form
were
toes
.
After
15 Change preposition
apply
millions
years later, Change to singular
million
a
Correct article usage
apply
further
devolpment
Correct your spelling
development
seen
in Add a missing verb
was seen
such
kind
of habitant where their body Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
grown
even larger. Add the auxiliary verb
grew
Not to mention
, merychippus's toes
almost entirely transformed into hooves as well
as
the length of the legs Correct word choice
and
are
much longer. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Finally
, in this
era, the modern horse is four times bigger than initial
size. Correct pronoun usage
its initial
In addition
, they also
fully developed their hooves, and the
legs Change the word
their
grown
much stronger to adapt Add the auxiliary verb
grew
for
running and endurance.Change preposition
to
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words toes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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