The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts below illustrate protein, carbohydrates and fat had
proportion
in three different diets.
Overall
, it can be seen that carbohydrates had the highest proportion
, followed by protein, while
the lowest had fat.
On the one hand, looking at the pie charts in detail, the biggest carbohydrates which was the healthy diet
for sports at 60 per cent
, followed by a healthy diet
at 50 per cent
. The last
one was the average diet
at 40 per cent
. Moreover
, Protein was the second proportion
which started with the average diet
at 40 per cent
. Next,
a healthy diet
was the same at 30 per cent
. Finally
, a healthy diet
for sport was at 25 per cent
.
On the other hand
, Regarding the lowest data. the fat had the lowest data, it started at 25 per cent
the healthy diet
. On the other hand
, the average diet
and healthy diet
stayed the same at 20 per cent
of proportion
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