The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Vite at least 150 words.

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The given maps compare changes that happened to the floor plan of a public library in 2 various years( 20 years ago and now).

Overall

, it is important that the facilities that help people to spend more time in the library have been climbing;

furthermore

, some spaces that were wasted have been removed.

According to

the pictures, In the centre of the floor, it had some tables and chairs;

however

, now

this

area is empty. children's

books

, in the north-east of the floor, is replaced by a Lecture room and it moved to the north-west place, which was CDs, videos, and computer games,

also

this

place is bigger than the prior;

additionally

, the new place has a sofa, storyline events, and children fiction

books

. Adult non-fiction

books

, under children's

books

, are the same as past;

nevertheless

, there have been added information desks and self-service machines in

this

district. The graphs demonstrate Enquiry desk has been altered by the cafe.

In addition

, adult fiction

books

and reading rooms respectively have been changed by All reference

books

and computer rooms

while

the thing they have not changed is the entrance.

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