The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Vite at least 150 words.

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The given maps compare changes that happened to the floor plan of a public library in 2 various years( 20 years ago and now).

Overall

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, it is important that the facilities that help people to spend more time in the library have been climbing;

furthermore

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, some spaces that were wasted have been removed.

According to

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the pictures, In the centre of the floor, it had some tables and chairs;

however

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, now

this

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area is empty. children's

books

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, in the north-east of the floor, is replaced by a Lecture room and it moved to the north-west place, which was CDs, videos, and computer games,

also

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this

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place is bigger than the prior;

additionally

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, the new place has a sofa, storyline events, and children fiction

books

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. Adult non-fiction

books

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, under children's

books

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, are the same as past;

nevertheless

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, there have been added information desks and self-service machines in

this

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district. The graphs demonstrate Enquiry desk has been altered by the cafe.

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, adult fiction

books

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and reading rooms respectively have been changed by All reference

books

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and computer rooms

while

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the thing they have not changed is the entrance.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

188 words

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