The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of stores that started and shut down in a nation from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, in the beginning, the highest number
of shops
opened and closed while
at the end
of the period it reduced.
Firstly
, 8500 shops
opened in 2011, which is the highest number
in this
graph. After
this
, it quickly decreased within a year. The number
of stores dramatically increased until 2014 and it almost met the closures shops
count with approximately 6500. Moreover
, in the middle of the years between 2015 and 2016 the number
of new shops
stabilized, next to this
there was a dramatic increase happened in 2017 with around 4200. In comparison with 2011, the number
of shops
decreased to half of the amount in the year 2018.
Secondly
, in 2011 there were around 6500 shops
closed and this
continuously decreased until 2012. One notable change was that the highest number
of shops
closed in 2013. However
, the lowest number
of shops
closed in the year 2015. Additionally
, in 2016 there were shops
closed amount rapidly increased to around 5000.Submitted by shruthiudhai7 on
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