In the present era, the diversity of
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of the world. The cause of
phenomenon is the advancement of the social
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through globalization. I personally view
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heritages.
The foremost cause of the mixing trend of
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of
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social media. Reports said that the vast majority of people are having their lifestyles influenced by things they find on
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social platforms.
, a trending fashion in Korea will easily spread via
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and not long after, other countries will follow the same fashion season.
,
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platform is undeniably the major cause of the
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of different
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, the variety of heritages will eventually vanish from their regions because the people will forget and not preserve them.
, many students in Indonesia have forgotten their national anthems even though, they remember all the
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of their
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overseas singers.
, with the disappearance of some heritages, humanity will
lose the value of experiences. Overseas tourists will not pick an interest to go to another country, as they know that the countries have the same
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them and they will not get the new excitement of learning a new experience.
In conclusion,
worldwide have slowly become similar
the enhancement of people’s connection via social media. I consider
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a negative trend because
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.