Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen

Dear Raju, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with your
dog
because your pet is creating a lot of problems for my family. My name is Rohit, your next-door neighbour, unit number 321. We
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here
last
month because
this
is a very quiet place than where used to live before. I have
newborn
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a newborn
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baby and her health is not good, so the doctor suggested we give her proper rest during
night time
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nighttime
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. But, your
dog
barks the whole night and day which makes a noise so, my baby cannot sleep well.
Also
, she wakes up 3
and
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or
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4 times per time which is not good for her well-being.
Moreover
, my sister came here
last
week for her exams, so preparation is going on for tests.
However
,
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the
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loud noise of your
dog
creates issues in her preparations. She has first and
last
to clear these exams. If possible, keep your
dog
inside the housefor
afull
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a full
full
day by using a bark collar, or look for a
dog
trainer
which
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who
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helps to create a peaceful environment. I hope to see prompt action from your side regarding
this
issue and if you need any help finding a good trainer
then
let me know because one of my
friend
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gives training to pets. Your loving, Rohit
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suitable writing tone
Try to maintain a consistent tone throughout the letter. While expressing dissatisfaction, ensure to be polite and constructive.
single idea per paragraph
In your paragraphs, stick to one main idea and support it with relevant details. This will improve clarity and coherence.
complete response
Clear statement of the problem and its impact on your family.
greeting and closing
Usage of appropriate greetings and closing statements, maintaining a formal tone.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • constantly barks
  • disturbance
  • sleep deprivation
  • our community
  • considerate
  • reasonable request
  • mutual understanding
  • possible solutions
  • bring the dog indoors
  • bark collar
  • dog trainer
  • vet advice
  • distressed pet
  • resolve this issue
  • accommodative
  • soundproofing
  • wellbeing
  • peaceful environment
  • necessary steps
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