The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860, and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860, and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps
illutrate
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illustrate
the transformation of
Wilington
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Wellington
town in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
Overall
, there
has
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been considerable developments after two centuries with regard
of
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new
constrution
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construction
of new
infrastucture
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infrastructure
, housing and roads but
also
the loss of
the
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green space.
Initially
, in 1780, the town only consisted of 4 farmlands,100 houses and a bunch of trees for a small community. Following by the year 1860, new pathways
such
as
brigde
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bridge
and main road
have been
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constructed in order for the people to cross the river for work or travel purposes. As the people
no
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longer farming, only two cultivated lands remained.
In
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the same time, more accommodations have been added twice as much as before. Looking at
20th
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century, the population appears to grow significantly. More housing and pavements were present. Public facilities and entertainment landscapes have been established, namely
shop
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shops
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,
school
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schools
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, sports
field
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fields
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and
wetland
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wetlands
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for birds.
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  • urban development
  • rural
  • undeveloped
  • substantially
  • railway line
  • market area
  • extensive urbanization
  • population growth
  • industrial areas
  • shopping centers
  • network of roads
  • public facilities
  • comparison
  • transformation
  • evolution
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