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The charts below give information on average life expectancy in four countries, from 1993 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on average life expectancy in four countries, from 1993 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts below give information on average
life
expectancy
 in four countries, from 1993 to 2008.
This
 bar chart and table provide data in terms of
life
expectancy
 consisting of 4 countries,
such
 as
Japan
,
Korea
, America, and
Indonesia
, period 1993 to 2008. By and large,
Japan
 and
Korea
 are more dominant regarding
life
expectancy
, meanwhile
Korea
 and
Indonesia
 are better in terms of
Increase
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an Increase
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 in
life
expectancy
. Transitioning
into
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to
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the
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apply
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Life
expectancy
,
Japan
 got the rank 1 with the highest average
umber
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number
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, which is 82.7,
follow
Wrong verb form
followed
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to
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by
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korea
Change the capitalization
Korea
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 which
has
Verb problem
is
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 79.2 years old the average, and the second lowest
is
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in
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US
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the US
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 and
Indonesia
 with 77.2 dan 70.9. In terms of the yearly increase in
life
expectancy
,
Indonesia
 has the highest position here with the
number
 5.1, followed by
Korea
 with
number
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the number
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 9.3.
While
japan
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Japan
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 has the highest rank in
life
expectancy
,
however
 in the
number
 increase,
japan
 has the second
low
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lowest
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, with
number
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the number
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 5.1.
moreover
US
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the US
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,
still
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is still
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 stagnant in the category of lowest
number
, with 3.2.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words life, expectancy, japan, korea, indonesia, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • trends
  • increase/decrease
  • significant
  • improvements
  • economic factors
  • lifestyle changes
  • healthcare
  • average
  • convergence
  • divergence
  • overall trend
  • future patterns
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