The charts below give information on average life expectancy in four countries, from 1993 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts below give information on average
life
expectancy
in four countries, from 1993 to 2008.
This
bar chart and table provide data in terms of life
expectancy
consisting of 4 countries, such
as Japan
, Korea
, America, and Indonesia
, period 1993 to 2008.
By and large, Japan
and Korea
are more dominant regarding life
expectancy
, meanwhile Korea
and Indonesia
are better in terms of Increase
in Correct article usage
an Increase
life
expectancy
.
Transitioning into
Change preposition
to
the
Correct article usage
apply
Life
expectancy
, Japan
got the rank 1 with the highest average umber
, which is 82.7, Correct your spelling
number
follow
Wrong verb form
followed
to
Change preposition
by
korea
which Change the capitalization
Korea
has
79.2 years old the average, and the second lowest Verb problem
is
is
Correct your spelling
in
US
and Correct article usage
the US
Indonesia
with 77.2 dan 70.9.
In terms of the yearly increase in life
expectancy
, Indonesia
has the highest position here with the number
5.1, followed by Korea
with number
9.3. Correct article usage
the number
While
japan
has the highest rank in Capitalize word
Japan
life
expectancy
, however
in the number
increase, japan
has the second low
, with Replace the word
lowest
number
5.1. Correct article usage
the number
moreover
US
, Correct article usage
the US
still
stagnant in the category of lowest Add a missing verb
is still
number
, with 3.2.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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