The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860, and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The three maps illustrate the differences in Willington
town
between the years 1780, 1860, and 2000. The town
showed a
significant development throughout the centuries. Correct article usage
apply
Although
the difference between the maps is clear, in 1780 the town
was not much deteriorated. Villages were getting more and more over years
.
As shown, Correct article usage
the years
population
surely has increased. Correct article usage
the population
As a result
, homes showed a jump throughout the years. 100 homes were additionally
constructed in 1860, while
300 more homes were built in 2000. In 1860, one farm got
replaced with a road allowing people to reach the side of the Verb problem
was
river
. In addition
, a bridge was added in the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
river
to allow people reach
the other hand side of the Fix the infinitive
to reach
river
. Moreover
, in 1860, the woods'
space Change noun form
wood's
was
decreased without a clear reason.
In 2000, the map presents a modern form of the Unnecessary verb
apply
town
. Shops were introduced at
the Change preposition
on
left hand
side of the Add a hyphen
left-hand
river
. Because learning has become an essential thing, two schools were built near to three sports fields. For sure, a road was constructed started
from the houses ended by the schools, allowing students to get their education. A wetland for the birds was found at the very end of the Wrong verb form
starting
river
too.
The town
have
been Change the verb form
has
modernalised
wisely to be a complete-service Correct your spelling
modernised
modernized
town
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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