Today,people are using the things and rhrowing or replacing it with latest models or latest fashion . Do the disadvantages pf throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantage ?

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people
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it with
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models on the one hand , in our increasingly global world
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nothings
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have been remaining
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to another , and humans need and like
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there is a phenomenal impact of media
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the
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commercial
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the brand new goods
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so that
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strategy of the biggest companies throughout the world .
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apple
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,
range rover
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,
samsung
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and the other
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brands .
furthermore
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that will clearly has been affect the economy because when
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individuals
buying
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more and the companies
sells
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more and more
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companies will pay bigger taxes
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government
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has
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influnce
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influence
on the economy of those countries .
on the other hand
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people
are always keen
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to show themselves in the best picture to look
like
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richer or more beautiful than previously so large brands take
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their products ,
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many
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been positive
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when replaced by the newest one like the
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medical machines like x_ ray and dentist machines it really deserve to
chang
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it or develop it ,
becuase
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because
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use
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for important stuff not just for fun on the whole ,
people
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dont
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affected
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effected
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affected
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by the media and society to buy new
things
for no
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the
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should
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wisely before
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or
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their own
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