The chart below shows the main methods of transportation for people traveling to one university for work and study in 2004 and 2009

The pie chart illustrates the five main  features of transportation for people who visit only one university for

working

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or

studying

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study

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. Each of these reasons is clearly outlined in the legend.        Immediately, it is obvious that the car dominant vehicles for people

traveling

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to work in

university

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the university

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as well as

for studying,

whereas

train

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training

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less

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use vehicles in both years.         Going into more details, the car began the higher than the other at approximately 51%, and it was 

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viewpoint point of 

2004

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year before taking a nosedive  at 28% until 2009.

Moreover

, the fraction of the bus indicated that it was the second viewpoint point than other figures at above 33% in 2004,

then

stood at

this

level for a

five year

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period before presenting a marginal growth at 46% by the end of the time frame.     

Additionally

, the bicycle exhibited a gradual

rose

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for the entire interval,

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a 9% and finishing at 16%.

Furthermore

, two factors walking are quite equal weighted either have

train

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at 4% and 6%  respectively.