The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The line chart displays the
changes
by month in the prices
of cooper
, nickel and zinc in the year 2014.
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copper
Overall
, nickel started the period
with the highest percentage
, decreasing dramatically during the months. Zink had the lowest percentage
at the beginning of the year,
after Remove the comma
apply
a
steadily decreased and stable Correct article usage
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changes
finished the period
with the highest percentage
. Cooper was the metal with most
stable Correct article usage
the most
prices
throughout the period
.
The changes
on
Change preposition
in
prices
of Nickel started Correct article usage
the prices
in
6% and dropped abruptly reaching -3% in June, after Change preposition
at
a
slowly Correct article usage
apply
increased
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increasing
it
and kept remained for 3 months until Correct pronoun usage
apply
reach
just over 1% Wrong verb form
reached
at the end
of the period
.
Cooper started with the second highest percentage
with 2 %, however
, the changes
in prices
hovered between 2% and zero during the months. Zinc started with the lowest percentage
around 1% after a small increased
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increase
it
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percentage
dramatically went down until June with just over -1%, then
it kept stable until October when started to went
up, reaching Change the verb
go
the
highest Change the word
its
percentage
2
%.Change preposition
of 2
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