The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860, and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

maps

below illustrate how the city of Wallington was changed from 1980 to 2000.

Overall

, it can be seen there were many public facilities which had been changed, but some built have been removed to change another construction. Looking at the

maps

in detail, in 1780 the left of the

maps

had a river, but in 1860 it was built a bridge and added a new road.

In addition

, the Centre of

maps

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had been

farm

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in 1780.

Nevertheless

, expanded the farm.

Moreover

, beside the right of the map was constructed the village, but it added some one village. And

then

, 100 homes were constructed in 1980, It added to 200 homes in 1860. The

last

woods were built in 1780, it have expanded to new woods. Regarding the

maps

in 2000 from 1860 to 2000. On the left of the

maps

was added a wetland for birds,

Next,

beside the right of the

maps

included the village, road and homes.

Furthermore

, there were many added new built

such

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school

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schools

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, sports and fields.

On the other hand

woods

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wood

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was removed in 2000.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

184 words

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urban development
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undeveloped
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railway line
market area
extensive urbanization
population growth
industrial areas
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network of roads
public facilities
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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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