The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing
ethanol
, a type of biofuel, from plants
.
Overall
, the production of ethanol
involves ten distinct stages, starting with the absorption of sunlight and carbon dioxide by plants
and concluding with the use of ethanol
as a fuel in various transportation vehicles. The process includes both biological and chemical transformations.
Initially
, trees and plants
absorb sunlight and carbon dioxide to carry out photosynthesis, producing essential energy. Once harvested, these plants
are milled into smaller pieces to prepare them for further
processing. The milled plant material is then
subjected to a chemical treatment that breaks down cellulose into simpler sugars
. These sugars
are collected and processed to make them suitable for fermentation.
Next,
the sugars
are fermented by adding yeast or other microbes. This
biological process converts the sugars
into ethanol
. The resulting ethanol
is then
separated and purified through distillation and filtration to ensure it meets the required quality standards. Finally
, the purified ethanol
is utilized as a renewable fuel in vehicles, including cars, trucks, and aeroplanes.Submitted by saharaqajani on
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