In some countries young people are encouraged to work and travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Nowadays, several countries provide

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their

students

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which they can

work

and

travel

simultaneously for a year in the time interval between ending high school and starting college.

Accordingly

, there are some benefits

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this

assertion, but

also

it presents a number of drawbacks.

To begin

with, young people could gain a lot of advantages by taking

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year in order to

work

and

travel

.

FIrstly

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, working or

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can expose young individuals to new cultures, lifestyles, and ideas, which can increase their maturity and self-awareness. Consider Kazakhstan as an example: many academies in Kazakhstan

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plenty of

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opportunities

for their

students

such

as travelling abroad and studying there which is called

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and

travel

program, by participating in

this

program

students

can easily explore other countries and their cultures, lifestyles and so on.

Secondly

, it is logical that gaining

work

experience can provide practical skills and insights into different industries, enhancing future career prospects,

thus

people would be able to illustrate their experience at working on

this

project.

Finally

, if

students

take

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advantage of working and travelling abroad, they will improve their academic focus. Because

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a break may allow them to approach their university studies with renewed focus and

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determination

.

However

, one of the biggest problems with

this

proposal may be money.

Due to

the fact that these types of programmes can be paid for, some individuals would experience a number of problems with

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. Because

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or unpaid

internships

can be expensive and may contribute to financial strain or increased student debt.

Nevertheless

,

in addition

to unpaid

internships

, there are several programmes that can provide paid

travel

and accommodation

while

working or travelling.

For example

, popular

internships

such

as FLEX,

Work

and

Travel

etc. do not require money as pupils just have to go through some other

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. In conclusion, young

students

have to take the opportunity and participate

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such

programmes

due to

the fact that they can give them a lot of benefits.

Although

some of them may demand some money, people are able to find other types of

internships

without financial

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.