The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart displays the

gym

membership

for both

men

and

women

between 1980 and 2010.

Overall

, from 1980 to 2005 more

men

than

women

attended the

gym

. In 1995 and 2007 there was an increase in

women

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gym

memberships

. In 1980, the number of

men

that

has gone

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to the

gym

was 2000,

this

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amount increased to 4000 In 1985, after a little peak

at the end

of the 80s, the number of

males

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male

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gym

membership

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memberships

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went down to less than 2000

memberships

by 1995. From 1998 to 2006 the male

membership

went up reaching 5000

members

. In 2006 the presence of

men

in gyms extremely decreased

just

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below 800,

members

by 2010.

Respect of

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the

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apply

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women

,

the

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apply

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gym

memberships

started

in

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at

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1000 in 1980, after that time the number of females in

gym

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the gym

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started to increase, reaching 2900

members

in 1995.

from

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1996 to 2001

less

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fewer

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women

went to the

gym

until reaching a peak of 2900

members

in 2006.

Then

the female

gym

membership

went down in the 2000s to nearly 2000

memberships

.