The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart displays the
gym
Use synonyms
membership
for both Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
between 1980 and 2010.
Use synonyms
Overall
, from 1980 to 2005 more Linking Words
men
than Use synonyms
women
attended the Use synonyms
gym
. In 1995 and 2007 there was an increase in Use synonyms
Use synonyms
women
Change noun form
women's
gym
Use synonyms
memberships
.
In 1980, the number of Use synonyms
men
that Use synonyms
has gone
to the Wrong verb form
went
gym
was 2000, Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
amount increased to 4000 In 1985, after a little peak Correct word choice
and this
at the end
of the 80s, the number of Linking Words
males
Change the noun form
male
gym
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
membership
went down to less than 2000 Fix the agreement mistake
memberships
memberships
by 1995. From 1998 to 2006 the male Use synonyms
membership
went up reaching 5000 Use synonyms
members
. In 2006 the presence of Use synonyms
men
in gyms extremely decreased Use synonyms
just
below 800, Change preposition
by just
members
by 2010.
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Respect of
Change preposition
With respect to
the
Correct article usage
apply
women
, Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
gym
Use synonyms
memberships
started Use synonyms
in
1000 in 1980, after that time the number of females in Change preposition
at
Use synonyms
gym
started to increase, reaching 2900 Add an article
the gym
members
in 1995. Use synonyms
from
1996 to 2001 Capitalize word
From
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
women
went to the Use synonyms
gym
until reaching a peak of 2900 Use synonyms
members
in 2006. Use synonyms
Then
the female Linking Words
gym
Use synonyms
membership
went down in the 2000s to nearly 2000 Use synonyms
memberships
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gym, membership, men, women, memberships, members with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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