Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs in order to save money Write letter to the local council in your letter •give details of how you and your friends or family use the center •explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
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Dear
sir
or Capitalize word
Sir
madam
,
I am writing about a Capitalize word
Madam
sport
and leisure Fix the agreement mistake
sports
center
that you are trying to close.
Change the spelling
centre
Firstly
, this
center
is very close to my home,l go to Change the spelling
centre
this
sport
Change the noun form
sports
center
every two days to exercise with my friends, it is very good for my health and so I am not tired at all at work. My parents always go to Change the spelling
centre
this
leisure on weekends to relax because it helps to calm their nerves to get ready for the new work day. In addition
, the people living in this
neighborhood all use this
sports
and recreation center
which is the only recreation center
nearby. Residents of the neighborhood
come to Change the spelling
neighbourhood
this
center
because it is close to their homes. If Change the spelling
centre
this
center
is closed, they will not be able to do Change the spelling
centre
sports
and it will not benefit their health. In addition
to this
there is a swimming pool in summer this
center
is always crowded. I come here every day in the summer the facilities of Change the spelling
centre
this
cuter are very good if this
center
closes ,it will be difficult for all the athletes because another Change the spelling
centre
sports
center
is far from here. I would be grateful if Change the spelling
centre
unless
Correct word choice
apply
this
sports
center
Change the spelling
centre
closes
. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Wrong verb form
closed
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
Turayeva RayhonaCorrect your spelling
Yours
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task achievement
Your letter is clear and addresses all parts of the prompt. However, adding specific examples or anecdotes can make your response even stronger.
coherence cohesion
Make better use of paragraphs. Group related ideas together to create a more logical structure.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity and coherence.
task achievement
You have provided a complete response to the task, addressing all points required.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is appropriate and respectful, which is suitable for a letter to the local council.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.