A close relative of yours is having a birthday lunch next week, but you know you will be working. Write a letter to your boss or supervisor to ask for some time off. In your letter, – explain the situation and why you particularly want to attend the lunch – specify the dates, times and amount of time off you will need – offer to work late or come in early another time to make up for the time
Dear Mr Rogers,
I'm writing to inquire about any possibility
for
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of
a
time off from my job to the biggest birthday party lunch I've ever seen before.
As you know my uncle is the owner of Correct article usage
apply
the
big football club. And his youngest son who is his favourite is welcoming his 15s birthday party Correct article usage
a
on
next week. So Change preposition
apply
this
cannot be the best birthday without our family. Because my dad is best
uncle to him. But the main reason is not only that. The basic cause is that our whole relatives are gonna be attended to Change the article
the best
this
lunch.
That's why I need to get to this
junket. So I need one day off from my job. My uncle was
once Verb problem
apply
saying
that it Wrong verb form
said
will
be on Wednesday. But yesterday he told us he will be on his tour for Wrong verb form
would
friendly
football match on Wednesday. In Add an article
a friendly
this
case party
moved to Friday.
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the party
On the other
hand
I didn't forget about work. I can offer you that I will work till Add a comma
hand,
sun
goes down and I will be here before dusk till dawn.
Thank you for understanding.
Yours sincerely,
Mr UktamovAdd an article
the sun
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task achievement
Provide more details about the exact times and amount of time off you need to ensure clarity.
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Use more polite and formal language, particularly when making a request to your boss.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph develops a single idea clearly and concisely to improve overall coherence.
coherence cohesion
Double-check sentences for grammatical accuracy and avoid colloquial terms like 'junket' when writing formally.
task achievement
The letter clearly explains the reason for the request, showing the significance of the event.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately polite and formal.
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