Task 1; The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The provided bar chart gives data on the United Kingdom graduate and postgraduate
students
on their destination after leaving college in 2008, namely part-time work
, voluntary work
, further
study
and unemployment . The units are measured by number of students
.
At first glance, it is clear that
a multitude of individuals prefer further
study
in comparison with other destinations, which exclude full-time work
.
Among graduates, further
study
comprised approximately 30,000 students
. The figures for unemployment and part-time work
were relatively similar, standing at 16,235 and 17,735 respectively. Voluntary work
among graduate students
reached the nadir with 3,500 students
.
On the other hand
, the preferences of postgraduate students
were versatile and multifaceted. Only a slight difference existed among individuals who chose further
study
( 2,725) and part-time work
( 2,535). Nevertheless
, of studying at college, 1,625 students
did not have a desire to work
. However
, voluntary work
reached the nadir with 345 postgraduate students
who did not go into full-time jobs after leaving college.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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