The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. (rewriteja)
The diagram provides a breakdown of how carbonated drinks are produced.
Overall
, the production of carbonated drinks involves raw Linking Words
water
undergoing five distinct stages at which the Use synonyms
water
is cleaned, carbonated, mixed with other ingredients, packaged and eventually delivered to the general public.
The Use synonyms
process
commences when raw Use synonyms
water
from households flows in pipes to a device where it is filtered and softened by the use of chemicals. The clean Use synonyms
water
is Use synonyms
thereafter
pumped to electric heaters and goes through a cooling pipe to another device where the carbonation Linking Words
process
takes place. During Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
process
, carbon dioxide from another pipe is added to the Use synonyms
water
.
The carbonated Use synonyms
water
is Use synonyms
then
sent to a cylindrical tank in which it is mixed with colouring, syrup, and flavours and filtered for the second time before being filled into bottles and cans. At Linking Words
this
stage of the Linking Words
process
, the finished beverages are packaged into boxes and eventually dispatched to supermarkets.Use synonyms
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