The diagrams show how the bee makes honey and the stages in the production of honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of how a
bee
makes Use synonyms
honey
with 6 main steps, Use synonyms
first,
the queen Linking Words
bee
would egg in a Use synonyms
honeycomb
and the final step is the Use synonyms
bee
leaving nectar in the Use synonyms
hive
to produce Use synonyms
honey
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the production of Linking Words
honey
begins with removing the Use synonyms
honeycomb
from the Use synonyms
hive
, and Use synonyms
finally
selling it to the customers.
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To begin
with, the queen Linking Words
bee
puts the eggs in the Use synonyms
honeycomb
, and Use synonyms
then
waits for three days, before it becomes a larva. Linking Words
Thirdly
, one week later the larva will be fully grown, and after three more weeks, bees will leave their Linking Words
hive
to gather nectar from the flowers. Use synonyms
Lastly
, bees come back to the Linking Words
hive
to leave nectar to make Use synonyms
honey
.
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Additionally
, in the production of Linking Words
honey
, Use synonyms
first,
the beekeeper removes the Linking Words
honeycomb
from the Use synonyms
hive
and puts the Use synonyms
honeycomb
in the machine to extract Use synonyms
honey
. After that, clean the Use synonyms
honey
by boiling it, when it is finished, remove the Use synonyms
honey
into a jar and ready for selling.Use synonyms
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